Tuesday 29 May 2018
Saturday 17 March 2018
Chip Lit Fest Short Story Competition
I'm delighted to have won this year's Chip Lit Festival Short story competition with my short story, Burials.
Judge Rachel Seiffert said of it: 'it is a dark and very well-crafted mini thriller, with a finely-drawn detective protagonist, who must seek to understand the disturbed mind of her main suspect in order to solve the crime.'.
Judge Rachel Seiffert said of it: 'it is a dark and very well-crafted mini thriller, with a finely-drawn detective protagonist, who must seek to understand the disturbed mind of her main suspect in order to solve the crime.'.
Thursday 4 January 2018
First Place in Writing Magazine Competition
Delighted that my story, Whisky Night, an adapted extract from my novel, Cloudland, won first prize in Writing Magazine's competition for a story featuring a single character. You can read the story here.
The judge's called it a "a tour de force of accumulated impressions and heightened perceptions that convey the way death changes everything and nothing: Ash's world reshapes itself in its new form as the story is being written."
The judge's called it a "a tour de force of accumulated impressions and heightened perceptions that convey the way death changes everything and nothing: Ash's world reshapes itself in its new form as the story is being written."
Saturday 16 December 2017
The Member of the Wedding by Carson McCullers
Frankie Adams is an “unjoined person.” Part of her craves
connection, part of her is attracted by disconnection. She is contrary:
sometimes sweet, sometimes bad-tempered; sometimes practical sometimes ethereal.
She is an innocent, a twelve-year-old still baffled by the adult world and
simultaneously drawn to and repelled by it. She is deeply in love with her
brother and his soon-to-be bride and the focus of the book is her implacable
but doomed resolve that, after the wedding, the three of them will drive off
together into the wilderness.
Read on a simple level, The Member of the Wedding is a
gentle, beautiful, witty and sad story of adolescent confusion. Even read on
this level it is a great work. But it goes deeper than this, of course.
Otherwise we would be left with a novel presenting only the cliched oxymorons
of teenage angst, that life can be bitter and sweet, funny and sad. That isn’t
to decry such works – they have a power of their own – but Carson McCullers’s
perception of human nature goes far beyond such truisms. Her disconnection is a
cry for love, and her love is fractured by disconnection.
In The Member of the Wedding, she presents us with three
fragile human beings: the gangly outsider Frankie; her black,
four-times-married maid, Berenice and her first cousin, six-year-old John
Henry. The interplay between them is remarkable. These
ordinary people, none of them eloquent in the ways of human love, nonetheless manage to reveal extraordinary truths. Each has been born into a
fixed identity, into a role that society expects of them – Berenice already to
service; Frankie, in time, to marriage and children; and John Henry, even
later, to a lifetime in the workplace of men. But each of these characters, in
their own way, eschews convention.
The pre-war certainties of gender and race give way here to
an understanding, simply, of people as people. John Henry reckons people should
be “half boy and half girl”; Frankie wants them to change back and forward
between sexes; Berenice imagines a world where everyone is light brown with
blue eyes and black hair. Theirs are worlds of fairness and goodness. They even
begin to criticise the Creator and each, in turn, assumes the role of “Holy
Lord God” and decrees a better world. John Henry’s is “a mixture of delicious
and freak”; Berenice’s contains no war, “[n]o stiff corpses hanging from the
Europe trees and no Jews murdered anywhere”; Frankie’s is “the best of the
three worlds”, in which she builds on Berenice’s basic concept, but adding “an
aeroplane and a motor-cycle to each person, a world club with certificates and
badges, and a better law of gravity”.
Their conversations around the kitchen table are perfectly
judged. They are slightly stylised, so that some of the subject matter, when
considered rationally, would be beyond at least the two children but, even so,
the fictive dream holds: their visions of a better world are lucid and
appealing and we remain in thrall to these three uncommon sages.
This is no, Eden, however. McCullers is no Pangloss and the
imagined worlds of her characters are ultimately revealed not to be El Dorado.
Although wildly humorous and broadly uplifting, The Member of the Wedding is
explicit in its depiction of the disconnection of modern life. The experiences
of its characters make this clear.
The central character is Frankie, our free-spirited, lonely,
happy/unhappy, bored/engaged young tomboy. Her mother died giving birth to her
and her father is remote and uncomprehending of his daughter. Frankie feels
herself an outsider and dreams of escape. The novel begins:
It happened that green and crazy
summer when Frankie was twelve years old. This was the summer when for a long time
she had not been a member. She belonged to no club and was a member of nothing
in the world. Frankie had become an unjoined person who hung around in
doorways, and she was afraid.
She has dreams, and as the novel begins those dreams
coalesce around her fantasy of accompanying her brother and his fiancee on
their imminent honeymoon and beyond. She will, literally, become a “member of
the wedding” and the three of them will head afterwards into the wilderness of
Alaska and eventually they will make “thousands of friends, thousands and
thousands and thousands of friends.” They will be, she concludes, “members of
the whole world”. Thus, we have escape and flight, those essentials of freedom;
but we also have family connection, the assertion of familial bonds more loving
than those attaching Frankie to her father; and, more than that, we have a
strong sense of human connection, a promise of companionship among the entire
human family. The confusion wrought by her childhood alienation is thus, in
Frankie’s eyes, brought to a perfect resolution: freedom, with control; escape,
with ties; family, with community; private, with public. In Frankie’s
adolescent mind, such contradictions offer entirely practicable solutions to
the intractable problems of loneliness and hope and fear.
But Frankie’s entrance into adulthood is not, as we readers
quickly intuit, going to be so easy. The day of the wedding is, naturally, a
disaster. The bride manqué is spurned. But even before this, Frankie’s lessons
are harsh. Styling herself F. Jasmine to separate her grown-up self from the
childish Frankie she has come to hate, she goes into town and enters a bar.
Here, she is mistaken by a soldier for a much older girl and, unable to refuse,
goes with him to his room, where he attempts to seduce her. F. Jasmine is so
innocent she doesn’t even realise what is happening, only later making a
connection between this and an earlier experience, when she witnessed the
lodger and his wife in their room, as the lodger appeared to be having some
form of fit. Growing up, then, is not an idyllic rite of passage, and those who
dismiss The Member of the Wedding in such terms are not doing it justice.
Accompanying Frankie through much of the narrative are
Berenice and John Henry. Berenice, old (“I bet you are forty years old,” says
Frankie) and wise, represents the adulthood to which Frankie aspires, and John
Henry, her young cousin, the childhood from which she is retreating. The truth,
of course, is more complicated than that: at various times the woman retains
the sense of a child, and the boy reveals the insight of a man. But, in this
way, the three form a unique bond. At one point, one of the most beautiful in
the novel, they each burst into tears at precisely the same moment: “suddenly
it started, though why and how they did not know; the three of them began to
cry... and though their reasons were three different reasons, yet they started
at the same instant as though they had agreed together.” It is one of the most
arresting scenes I’ve read in a long time, a middle-aged black woman, a tomboy
half-girl, half-woman and an infant boy, sitting round a table, crying. It is
inexplicably moving.
Berenice is lost in the past. She has married four times,
but the latter three occasions are to men whom she married only because, in
different ways, they reminded her of her true love, her first husband Ludie,
who died of pneumonia the same year that Frankie was born. She married him when
she was thirteen – that is when she was only a year older than Frankie is now. Thus,
while Frankie is straining to embrace the future and move into adulthood,
Berenice’s emotional development has stalled completely: an adult, dismissive
of Frankie’s childish whims, she is nonetheless stuck in the past, holding to
memories of younger, happier times, and is as confounded by visions of the
future as the confused child.
The final member of the triumvirate is John Henry West. How
difficult is it to write convincingly of a six-year-old main character? Cormac
McCarthy tried and failed in The Crossing: in the early drafts Boyd Parham is
only seven, but by the time of the published draft he has aged to fourteen. But
John Henry West is a living, breathing boy. In a way, in some emotional or
spiritual sense, he is the eldest of the three, wise beyond his years, calm and
sensible, except when he is covering the walls of the kitchen with “queer,
child drawings” or picturing the freaks from the Chattahoochee Exposition who
so excite his interest. His heartbreaking fate represents the end of childhood
and, no matter how much we always want to break that bond at the time, age and
experience and weariness usually return us, at one time or another, to a sense
of nostalgia for those lost days. John Henry reminds us that we cannot.
So what is The Member of the Wedding about? For McCullers,
it is about belonging. She writes:
I to think the idea of wanting to
belong haunts every child. And not only children. I think it is the primary
question: ‘Who am I? What am I? Or, where do I belong? and where can I belong?’
But childhood or adolescence is a time of crisis, and such questions are more haunting,
more immediate, then.
It is that, and it’s more than that. Belonging is a basic
human desire but it brings with it, too, a sense of need. And it requires love,
and faith, and trust. The necessity of love and the difficulty of love –
whether that is romantic love or familial love or societal love – that is what
this novel addresses. That something so necessary and so beautiful can be, at
the same time, so painful is what makes love such a difficult emotion to
manage. And that is why our human connections are always so fragile.
The saddest, most beautiful reflection of this sad and
beautiful book is that, throughout, Frankie is
connected. All along, she is indeed part of a marriage of three – a marriage
between her and Berenice and John Henry. But, as it transpires, this marriage is
as illusory as the one in Frankie’s imagination, and it fractures into tragedy.
The triumph of The Member of the Wedding is that, through this tragedy, a sense
of hope remains.
Sunday 10 December 2017
The Heart is a Lonely Hunter by Carson McCullers
I suspect if I’d read The Heart is a Lonely Hunter
twenty-five years ago I’d have become the bore in the corner telling everyone
how they just have to read this book. Perhaps I’ll make up for lost time now.
There are very few books I’ve finished and immediately wanted to start reading
all over again. Tess of the D’Urbervilles was the first. The Tin Drum was
second. One Hundred Years of Solitude next. That may be about it. And now The
Heart is a Lonely Hunter. Carson McCullers was twenty-three when she wrote this
book. I don’t know how she did it. At twenty-three I had come nowhere close to
understanding myself, let alone the rest of humanity. At twenty-three McCullers
created a living world of living people, lonely and sad human beings,
disconnected, wanting, longing, failing, falling prey to a world for which they
were ill-equipped. Human beings who failed and were failed.
The novel focuses on five central characters, essentially
archetypes who represent humanity and its problems. In Dr Copeland we have the
embodiment of the civil rights movement and the struggle against racism; in
Mick, a thirteen-year-old girl, we see the travails of young (especially poor) women growing up in a
male-dominated world; in Jake we have the communist conscience, the struggle of
the worker against the system; Singer, the deaf-mute, is the eternal outsider,
searching for companionship; and Biff, keeping his cafe open throughout the
night even though it is uneconomic to do so, because he can think of nothing
else to do and because nobody else is doing it, is slowly ageing, watching his
life disappear into sameness and disappointment. If this sounds contrived,
writing by numbers, a character for every ‘issue’, then don’t be fooled. This
may be the basic structure of The Heart is a Lonely Hunter, but it is far from
rigid, and the episodic plot, in which each of the characters interact in turn,
falling in and out of the action, feels beautifully organic. It is a
masterclass in marshalling your resources.
In particular, a significant strength of the novel is the
way that McCullers uses voice to develop character. The narrative is presented
in third person but takes the perspective of each of the major characters in
turn. Thus, we see the development of the five principals from each other’s
perspective. For example, when we begin to discern the otherworldliness of
Singer, it is Biff who tells us that Jake and Mick have both turned him into a
‘sort of home-made God’ because his muteness allows them to project their
idealised visions of goodness onto him. Or, of Doctor Copeland, we learn from
his daughter, Portia, that he ‘done lost God and turned his back to religion’
and all his troubles stem from that loss. Explaining her approach, McCullers
wrote:
There are five different
styles of writing - one for each of the main characters who is treated
subjectively and an objective, legendary style for the mute. The object of each
of these methods of writing is to come as close as possible to the inner
psychic rhythms of the character from whose point of view it is written.
This explanation also reveals another of the great
strengths of the novel, the way it melds realism and mythicism. Ihab Hassan
sees this as a problem with the text, suggesting that McCullers fails to
successfully integrate ‘social man’ and ‘individual man’, that is, outer
reality (history) and inner reality (psychology). I cannot agree. The structure
of the novel is controlled perfectly and there is a clear progression from the
characters and their internal preoccupations to the dangers of the wider world
(the novel is set in 1939, in the lead-up to the Second World War, and
culminates in a race riot). The key to this structural cohesion is the
character of Singer, the mute. He is both real and unreal, occupying an important
place in the lives of the other characters but existing, himself, in a kind of
alternative reality where he and his mute friend, Antonapoulos, consigned early
in the novel to an asylum, can continue to live in harmony. The ‘home-made
God’, as Biff describes him, is much treasured by the other characters, though
he himself is completely unaware of this. And in the novel’s final part, after
Singer’s death, their reactions to that death help to solidify their beliefs.
Each of them acts, makes a statement in the real world, sees their interaction
with that real world develop. Thus, a strong element of realism in the novel is
manifested through the subtle use of McCullers’ ‘legendary style’.
Oliver Evans, writing in 1962, notes that ‘[i]t is
impossible to understand Mrs. McCullers' work unless one realizes that she
conceives of fiction chiefly as parable. The reader who concerns himself
exclusively with the realistic level of her stories will never fully appreciate
them.’ Evans goes on to suggest that narrative is always secondary to allegory
in McCullers’ work, describing her as a ‘didactic writer’ whose goal is to
teach truths about human nature rather than to entertain. Again, I disagree.
There are moments when the novel does slip into didacticism, such as when the
Jewish boy, Harry Minowitz lectures Mick on Nazi Germany or some of Jake’s more
laboured political pronouncements, but to describe the overall allegorical tone
as didactic does McCullers a disservice. Evans is correct, however, to stress
that a literal reading of McCullers in realist vein is unlikely to be
rewarding.
Such an approach – and this is where I think Hassan’s
analysis falls down, underestimates the depth of the central theme. The Heart
is a Lonely Hunter is a novel about human love. It is about our aspirations and
our needs, the concomitants of fruitful, fulfilled lives, the potential for
happiness, the danger of despair. It is, therefore, intensely personal: the
novel explores these individuals’ lives, what it is that makes them who they are.
Yet it does so against a realist backdrop in which Dr Copeland suffers vicious
racism; in which, surrounded by friends, Singer fails to find friendship; in
which Jake rails helplessly at the downtrodden workers who cannot or will not
help themselves; where Mick finds her dreams tempered by harsh economic
reality; and where Biff, that lonely seeker of companionship, continues his
fruitless quest. People close to these characters die; others are abused
horribly. The world turns and history proceeds in violence. And these people,
these poor symbols of humanity, are inextricably bound to it. Alienation and
isolation afflict them. Through it all, their preoccupation is to find love.
All of this may sound as though the novel presents a
hopeless world, but far from it. There is much despair for the characters here,
but their plight shows a path for us. Connection, communication, this is the
key. Thus, the tragedy of The Heart is a Lonely Hunter is demonstrated by each
of the characters’ desperate search for communication, human empathy. They all
want somebody to know. But ultimately each is incapable of knowing anyone else.
Each is sloughed in their own travails and, when opportunities arise, they fail
to take them. Thus, Dr Copeland and Jake come close to agreement on the need
for action against the increasing racist tendency, but end up repelling one
another and parting acrimoniously. Earlier, Copeland even manages to alienate
his own family, from whom he is already largely estranged but who, through his
daughter, Portia, attempt a reconciliation with him; it fails because Copeland
proves quite incapable of hiding his disappointment at his children’s meek
acceptance of racism. Meanwhile, Singer remains oblivious of the wellspring of
goodwill that surrounds him. Mick’s attempts to help her young brother
backfire. On the only occasion when all five main characters are present
together, in Singer’s room, there is only an awkward silence. They all want to
communicate, to express themselves, to share the human experience with others,
but they lack the wherewithal to achieve it. How may they - we - attain
fulfillment?
McCullers’ remedy, one suspects, is religious, and there
are strong religious resonances throughout The Heart is a Lonely Hunter.
However, whether one takes a religious or secular view, the predicament remains
as she describes it – the disconnection of the individual from society, the
difficulty of achieving community.
In this vein, many critics have argued that Singer is a
Christ-figure. Jan Whitt, for example, suggest that the remaining characters
‘seek to work out their own salvation’ through communicating with the mute
Singer who becomes, as a result, a ‘paralyzed Christ figure, so restricted by
the expectations of others that he is fictionalized by them.’ There is
certainly a strong argument for Singer-as-Christ. People are drawn to him, they
see in him whatever it is that they aspire to in the name of goodness. They see
him as a conduit to fulfillment. And this is the great irony of the novel. It
is the mute man who can show the others how to communicate, how to achieve
their aspirations. But, of course, they fail. They sit in silence, mistrusting
one another, resentful that they cannot be alone with Singer. And this, it
seems to me, is a powerful message: communication with one’s saviour, whoever
or whatever that may be, should not come at the expense of your fellow
humanity. For a so-called religious novel that seems to me a radical call to
humanist faith.
Therefore, it seems too simplistic to consider this to be
a religious novel. It is certainly spiritual, in as much as it presents a quest
for understanding, but too much remains unresolved for it to seriously be
claimed by those of a religious persuasion to be a religious novel. In this, it
appears to mirror McCullers’ own relationship with religion. Much like Herman
Melville, she was drawn to religion and aspired to belief, but found such
belief troublesome. Writing about The Heart is a Lonely Hunter, McCullers
described its themes as a ‘unifying principle or God.’ Note that this is a
principle or God, not of God. A search for godness is not the same thing as a
search for God. And godness, in The Heart is a Lonely Hunter, will ultimately
be found in humanity.
Christ – goodness – is in each of us and all of us,
humanity as a collective, and it is our failing that we cannot see it. We fail
to reach out to one another and, in so doing, we fail ourselves and we fail
each other. This is what The Heart is a Lonely Hunter reminds us.
Now, you just have to read this book...
The Man with the Golden Arm by Nelson Algren
It’s hard to
believe that The Man with the Golden Arm was written in 1949. It seems so
fresh, and so contemporary, and its approach to drugs and criminality so open,
that one wouldn’t believe it could be the product of buttoned-up, frightened post-war
America. The collection of deadbeats and low level criminals depicted in its
pages is remarkable.
The Chicago of the
novel seems to sit somewhere between Steinbeck’s Cannery Row and the apocalyptic
Africa of William Burroughs’ Wild Boys. The depiction of the daily lives of
these characters is more realistic than either of those novels: Steinbeck’s
Mack and the Boys, however impressively they are depicted, have the whiff of
idealism about them, while Burroughs, even when he is chronicling the more
savage side of drug-taking, always runs the risk of romanticising the life.
Algren does none of this. Like the characters of Carson McCullers, Algren’s are
real, flesh and blood, as prone to terrible mistakes as honourable acts. Reading
The Man with the Golden Arm, we believe we are in Chicago’s Polish Downtown,
and we believe in the moral and social disintegration of Frankie Machine, and
we believe that, despite this, the community of which he is a part will be
sustained. It is an outstanding example of naturalistic writing that can lay
bare the deprivations and assorted ills of a society and still leave one
feeling optimistic about human nature.
The eponymous Man
is Frank Majcinek, known to all as Frankie Machine, a stud-poker dealer
regarded as the best in the business, hence the golden arm of the title.
Addicted to morphine after being treated with it for an injury sustained in
World War 2, however, his life subsequently begins to unravel. His fabled
golden arm fails him. He falls into crime. His wife is in a wheelchair as a
result of his drunk-driving. He ends up in jail. His
mistress leaves him. Worse ensues. This sounds like a catalogue of calamity,
and it is, so how can one argue that The Man with the Golden Arm is an uplifting
piece of fiction?
Well, the first
thing to note is that the novel was, as one might expect, controversial in its
day. Norman Podhoretz, for one, thought it glorified the underclass at the
expense of decent society. Such an assertion from Podhoretz, of course, is
proof positive that the novel most certainly does not do that: being attacked
by Podhoretz is a clear indicator that you’re doing something
right and the more he criticises the more you should feel satisfied with your
efforts. And Algren, while clearly depicting the underclass of his novel in a
more positive way than neocons like Podhoretz would deem healthy, nonetheless
cannot be accused of naive liberalism. This can be seen most clearly in the
character of Captain Bednar.
Bednar is one of
the most human characters in the story. His humanism is not some starry-eyed
idealism: he knows the criminals he deals with are no good and will amount to
nothing. And yet he craves some form of connection with them. We are told, from
his point of view, that “[i]t was patently wrong that men locked up by the law
should laugh while the man who locked them there no longer felt able even to
cry.” He is trapped inside his own unhappiness. “I know you,” he says to them.
“You think you’re all members of one another, somethin’ like that.” And yes,
their community is “something like that”, but again not in a romanticised way. Those
critics of the novel, like Podhoretz, who suggest it is burdened by liberal
romanticising of poverty and the poorer classes haven’t read the novel, just
the cliched version of it their political views force upon it. Again from
Bednar’s point of view, we are told:
For every man was secretly against the law in his heart, the captain
knew; and it was the heart that mattered. There were no men innocent of intent
to transgress. If they were human – look out. What was needed, he had learned
long ago, was higher walls and stronger bars – there was no limit to what they
were capable of.
Somewhere along the line he had learned, too, that not one was worth the
saving. So he’d been right in saving none but himself. And if that had left
them all to be members of one another, then it had left him to be a member of
no one at all. Had, indeed, left him feeling tonight like the most fallen of
anybody.
This is
extraordinary stuff. The captain simultaneously condemns and pardons,
disapproves and understands, wants and rejects, seeks harmony and craves
isolation. His conflict is total and despairing. There are no easy answers,
either for him or for us. But there are questions, so many questions. And this
is why the novel is ultimately uplifting: it forces us to question
preconceptions, to wonder, to empathise, to criticise. It forces us out of the
comfort of our own prejudices to think about things and people and society in
radically different ways.
What is truly
astounding about the novel is its language. It is (before it was even invented)
hiphop, rap. Above all, it is jazz, a hymn to the motion and poetry of the
rhythms of life. Take this passage, told from the viewpoint of Sophie, trapped
upstairs in her wheelchair, listening to the activity down below:
The smell of despair, the odor of whisky and the scent of the night’s
ten thousand dancers, the perfume and the powder sprinked across the deep
purple roar of barrelhouse laughter, the armpit sweat cutting the blue cigar
smoke and the hoarse cries of those soon to grow hoarser with love, scents and
sounds of all things soon to be spread up through a thousand rooms into her own
room. Till the drinkers and the dancers, the gamblers and the hustlers and the
yearning lovers came dancing and loving, came gambling and hustling in a
wavering neon-colored cloud down her walls.
That writing is so
good it makes you shiver.
Wednesday 6 December 2017
Hello
Hello to the blog world - again.
I used to run a blog some time ago, using my writing name. I've given that up now and I'm writing under my own name, so I'm starting afresh.
I'm a writer who loves reading, and this blog will cover both aspects. I have an MA in Creative Writing and a PhD in American Literature, both from the University of Hull. Before returning to academia, I did a lot of writing, mostly short stories, and was successful in a number of competitions and was published in various journals and ezines.
After taking a break from my own writing to study for my PhD I returned refreshed and moved onto novels. I have written one novel, Cloudland, for which I'm currently seeking representation, and I'm currently on a second draft of my second novel, based on a true crime in Scotland in the 1930s.
So, hello and welcome
I used to run a blog some time ago, using my writing name. I've given that up now and I'm writing under my own name, so I'm starting afresh.
I'm a writer who loves reading, and this blog will cover both aspects. I have an MA in Creative Writing and a PhD in American Literature, both from the University of Hull. Before returning to academia, I did a lot of writing, mostly short stories, and was successful in a number of competitions and was published in various journals and ezines.
After taking a break from my own writing to study for my PhD I returned refreshed and moved onto novels. I have written one novel, Cloudland, for which I'm currently seeking representation, and I'm currently on a second draft of my second novel, based on a true crime in Scotland in the 1930s.
So, hello and welcome
Thursday 1 June 2017
Cormac McCarthy, James Fenimore Cooper and American Exceptionalism
There is little point in writing a full review of The Last of the Mohicans because it is so well known and has been so much written about that, frankly, I would have nothing new to say. In any case, I wasn’t reading it for the sake of the novel itself, but rather in order to understand its place in the development of the American novel. Having finally read it I can now understand why Blood Meridian, a novel of which I have been and will continue to be critical, had to be written.
Cooper’s novel demonstrates a strong ambivalence about native American Indians. There is admiration of some American Indian traditions, as exemplified by the “silent Warrior” and “cunning hunter” motifs which are prevalent throughout the novel, while Chingachgook and Uncas, the last two Mohicans, are clearly defined in heroic mode. But even the Huron enemies, for all their cartoonish depiction as savages and godless heathens, are at times given similarly positive characteristics. Their skill in hunting and tracking is celebrated. Their mastery of their landscape is praised.
Of course, they cannot be allowed to succeed, because they are savages, and Cooper’s novel is an early exemplar of a strain of American exceptionalism. Therefore, his description of the Indian foes veers between this immense natural intelligence and utter stupidity. In terms of writing craft this is weak: Cooper’s characters are puppets who react one way in a certain situation and in an entirely different way in another, according to the requirements of the plot. Thus, Magua, the great leader of the Huron, allows himself to be tricked and captured in a way that even a gauche ingenue of twelve years of age would be embarrassed to admit to.
But this is not what primarily interests me. The Last of the Mohicans is a badly written novel (although not as bad as it may appear - some of its apparent deficiencies are nothing more than the ephemeralities of changing tastes and sensibilities) and there would be little to be gained by exploring its weaknesses in detail. In any case, Mark Twain has already done a much better job than I could of Cooper criticism. What interests me most is the way the novel grapples with this question of American exceptionalism and its consequences.
American exceptionalism is not as straightforward as is often implied, at least on this side of the Atlantic, where we tend to view it as the American presumption of American superiority. The Puritan settlers were the first exceptionalists, whose exceptionalism was based on the premise that they and God and New England had been brought together in furtherance of the creation of a new Eden. This initial strand of religiously based exceptionalism was the first and possibly strongest. Later, a more naturalistic exceptionalism, based on the independent spirit of frontiersmen and of the wilderness itself, came to prominence. In this way, American exceptionalism developed through the secularisation of America’s core mythologies. But, again, this is not a straightforward or neat or linear narrative, because manifest destiny, that close cousin of American exceptionalism which came to prominence in the 1840s and 1850s, is deeply rooted in notions of divine providence. Its basis is as much religious as it is secular.
In various ways, then, American exceptionalism has shaped American consciousness for the past three hundred years but, in attempting to understand it, I think we need to appreciate that it is not as simple as the usual definition of white men being charged by God to exercise his will by taming and populating the heathen wildernesses of the west. If that were the case there would be a simple supplanting of one tradition with another, and all vestiges of native American consciousness would be removed. I suspect some will argue that this is exactly what did happen and will go further and describe the events of the 1840s and 1850s as virtually genocidal. I don’t wish to debate that in historical terms because I do not know enough about it, but what interests me is the extent to which, whether consciously or not, a strong strain of native American thought and belief has been replicated in the modern American psyche.
This is what we see in The Last of the Mohicans with its celebration of Indian forest craft. The silent warrior, working alone, demonstrating remarkable skill, entirely self-reliant, as depicted in the Indian characters, both “good” (Uncas, Chingachgook) and “bad” (Magua), has become a staple of American popular culture. Think John Wayne. Think Dirty Harry, Bruce Willis in Die Hard, Denzel Washington in The Book of Eli. You can certainly trace their lineage back to the American forefathers who arrived in Boston and started building their new Eden on hard work, perseverance, skill and religious observance, but you can also clearly see it in the American Indians they so bitterly opposed. Thus, there seems to be this ambivalence at the heart of American culture. Cooper’s cartoon Indian savages are depicted as manifestations of evil, and yet they are also invested with those very attributes that Americans hold dear. It’s a curious contradiction. It is generally supposed that the myth of American exceptionalism began to overshadow, and finally suffocate the Native American traditions. However, I’m not sure there is such an easy division; rather, there seems to have been a kind of parasitic symbiosis at play.
Perhaps, then, this notion of American exceptionalism is less rooted in Christianity than is supposed, and more connected with a spirituality which is still transcendent but more natural. Hawk-eye, in an argument with David, makes the following statement:
I have heard it said that there are men who read in books to convince themselves there is a God. I know not but man may so deform his works in the settlement, as to leave that which is so clear in the wilderness a matter of doubt among traders and priests. If any such there be, and he will follow me from sun to sun, through the windings of the forest, he shall see enough to teach him that he is a fool, and that the greatest of his folly lies in striving to rise to the level of One he can never equal, be it in goodness, or be it in power.
David is appalled by this. He clings to his Christian faith and, in particular, the ‘beautiful simplity of revelation’ which can only be approached by penetrating ‘the awful mystery of the divine nature.’ Hawk-eye, a self-proclaimed ‘warrior of the wilderness’, is scornful of David’s academic approach. He has no need of books because the truth is “open before your eyes” – that is, it is revealed in the wilderness surrounding them. This begins to chime with some of Cormac McCarthy’s thought in Blood Meridian, the ‘optical democracy’ of the natural environment, its ‘neuter austerity’, ‘mountains like the dark warp of the very firmament'.
Where The Last of the Mohicans and Blood Meridian differ, however, is in their approach to modernity and human (that is, technological) progress. McCarthy is broadly hostile, while Cooper remains imbued with the early pioneers’ faith in the future. An important symbol of this is Hawk-eye’s gun, so vital it even has a name, ‘Killdeer’. Hawk-eye’s brilliance with this implement (horribly exaggerated, of course, another fatal weakness in Cooper’s writing) is clearly counterpointed with the superb tracking and natural skills of the Indians: each is a master of their craft, each is presented as someone to be admired, their skill something to aspire to. And what better symbol is there of human technological progress, in all its brilliance and potential for evil, than the gun? And what more American? In his shooting duel with Magua, Hawk-eye claims that whichever proves to be the best marksman will be, by default, the “better man”. Note, that is not better shot, but better man, full stop. Therefore, through the symbol of Killdeer, Cooper is making a natural god of rationalism, reason, the progress of technology, while at the same time that symbolism is explicitly linked with tradition and nature.
This is something McCarthy does not do: on the contrary, his novels offer increasingly insistent critiques of modernity and its consequences. Cooper's approach points to an ambiguity at the heart of America relating to modernity and tradition, progress and conservatism, technology and agrarianism. Indeed, there is something of the Janus in the American’s ability to look in both directions at once. In The Last of the Mohicans, Cooper’s philosophy is an uncomfortable melding of the most positive forces of both native American Indian beliefs and westernised modernity. The result is this peculiar notion of American exceptionalism. McCarthy, blind to tradition and refusing to conform to established mythologies, will have none of it.
Therefore, there are no noble savages or stout defenders of Christian righteousness in Blood Meridian. There is no good and bad, no battle between cultures or for beliefs. The future is unordained and it is unlikely to be wholesome. In Blood Meridian there is simply death and destruction. In that brief period in history, McCarthy is telling us, and in that location, while searching for its new Eden humanity lost its humanity.
And that is the inherent danger of American exceptionalism.
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